Episode:Children of the Gods - Revision history

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	* At the same time, back in the [[harem of Chulak]], [[Teal'c]] returns to select another candidate for implantation. His choice falls upon [[Sha're]], who is taken away by the guards despite her resistance.		* At the same time, back in the [[harem of Chulak]], [[Teal'c]] returns to select another candidate for implantation. His choice falls upon [[Sha're]], who is taken away by the guards despite her resistance.
	* While the teams begin surveying the area around the Stargate, O'Neill repeatedly questions [[Daniel Jackson\|Daniel]] about his ability to return them safely to Earth. Meanwhile, the others concentrate on securing the location. [[Warren]] discovers fresh tracks in the surrounding terrain, suggesting recent activity, while Carter Carter establishes a defensive perimeter using [[Claymore]] mines. Recognizing that the Stargate's location is vulnerable, Kawalsky recommends relocating and establishing a more secure base camp elsewhere.		* While the teams begin surveying the area around the Stargate, O'Neill repeatedly questions [[Daniel Jackson\|Daniel]] about his ability to return them safely to Earth. Meanwhile, the others concentrate on securing the location. [[Warren]] discovers fresh tracks in the surrounding terrain, suggesting recent activity, while Carter Carter establishes a defensive perimeter using [[Claymore]] mines. Recognizing that the Stargate's location is vulnerable, Kawalsky recommends relocating and establishing a more secure base camp elsewhere.
	* Deep within the [[Chulak palace implantation room]], [[Apophis]] examines Sha're and immediately appears impressed by her determination and spirit. Using his [[Goa'uld hand device]], he subdues her and orders that she be placed upon the altar. A female [[Yametha]] then approaches carrying a mature [[Goa'uld symbiote]] within her abdominal pouch. Unlike the previous candidate, Sha're is accepted by the creature. The symbiote fully emerges, enters her body through the back of her neck, and takes possession of her. Wracked with pain, Sha're screams as the implantation is completed before the eyes of Teal'c, becoming the new host chosen for Apophis' queen.		* Deep within the [[Chulak palace implantation room]], [[Apophis]] examines Sha're and immediately appears impressed by her determination and spirit. Using his [[Goa'uld hand device]], he subdues her and orders that she be placed upon the altar. A female [[Yametha]] then approaches carrying a mature [[Goa'uld symbiote]] within her abdominal pouch. Unlike the previous candidate, Sha're is accepted by the creature. The symbiote fully emerges, enters her body through the back of her neck, and takes possession of her. Wracked with pain, Sha're screams as the implantation is completed before the eyes of Teal'c, becoming the new host chosen for Apophis' queen.

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	* In the [[Stargate Command briefing room]], [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]] convenes a classified meeting to assess the threat posed by the recent attack. Although eyewitnesses on [[Abydos]] believe that [[Ra]] has returned, both Hammond and [[Jack O'Neill]] point out that Ra was apparently killed ({{ep\|Stargate}}). [[Daniel Jackson]] proposes another explanation, suggesting that Ra was not unique but merely one member of a larger [[Goa'uld\|race]]. According to Daniel, the parasitic species once faced extinction and survived by taking human hosts, a fate that may have befallen many others besides Ra. While O'Neill remains confident that the enemy can be defeated as before, [[Samantha Carter\|Captain Carter]] reveals that the information recovered on Abydos has allowed the [[dialing computer]] to begin calculating new Stargate destinations. Although the process remains slow, it will eventually provide access to previously unreachable worlds. Despite his concerns about the dangers awaiting beyond the Stargate, Hammond announces that the [[President of the United States]] has authorized the formation of nine secret [[SG team\|teams]] tasked with exploration, reconnaissance, threat assessment, and diplomatic contact. [[SG-1]] will be led by O'Neill and include Carter, while [[SG-2]] will be commanded by [[Charles Kawalsky\|Major Kawalsky]], much to O'Neill's amusement. When [[Daniel Jackson]] argues that he should accompany SG-1 because Sha're has been abducted, Hammond makes it clear that other plans have been made for him. The briefing is interrupted when [[Major]] Samuels receives word that [[Ferretti]] has regained consciousness, prompting O'Neill to head immediately for the infirmary.		* In the [[Stargate Command briefing room]], [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]] convenes a classified meeting to assess the threat posed by the recent attack. Although eyewitnesses on [[Abydos]] believe that [[Ra]] has returned, both Hammond and [[Jack O'Neill]] point out that Ra was apparently killed ({{ep\|Stargate}}). [[Daniel Jackson]] proposes another explanation, suggesting that Ra was not unique but merely one member of a larger [[Goa'uld\|race]]. According to Daniel, the parasitic species once faced extinction and survived by taking human hosts, a fate that may have befallen many others besides Ra. While O'Neill remains confident that the enemy can be defeated as before, [[Samantha Carter\|Captain Carter]] reveals that the information recovered on Abydos has allowed the [[dialing computer]] to begin calculating new Stargate destinations. Although the process remains slow, it will eventually provide access to previously unreachable worlds. Despite his concerns about the dangers awaiting beyond the Stargate, Hammond announces that the [[President of the United States]] has authorized the formation of nine secret [[SG team\|teams]] tasked with exploration, reconnaissance, threat assessment, and diplomatic contact. [[SG-1]] will be led by O'Neill and include Carter, while [[SG-2]] will be commanded by [[Charles Kawalsky\|Major Kawalsky]], much to O'Neill's amusement. When [[Daniel Jackson]] argues that he should accompany SG-1 because Sha're has been abducted, Hammond makes it clear that other plans have been made for him. The briefing is interrupted when [[Major]] Samuels receives word that [[Ferretti]] has regained consciousness, prompting O'Neill to head immediately for the infirmary.

	* At the [[Stargate Command infirmary]], Ferretti is recovering from his injuries while attempting to reconstruct the address dialed by [[Apophis]]. Although still weak, he has already managed to identify several symbols from memory. Carter quickly realizes that his recollections may be sufficient to determine a complete Stargate address and provide the first lead in locating the kidnappers.		* At the [[Stargate Command infirmary]], Ferretti is recovering from his injuries while attempting to reconstruct the address dialed by [[Apophis]]. Although still weak, he has already managed to identify several symbols from memory. Carter quickly realizes that his recollections may be sufficient to determine a complete Stargate address and provide the first lead in locating the kidnappers.

	* Soon afterward, the members of [[SG-1]] and [[SG-2]] assemble in the embarkation room fully equipped for departure. Before the mission begins, Samuels reminds O'Neill that rescuing Sha're and Skaara is not SG-1's primary objective. He also stresses the importance of adhering to security procedures involving the [[GDO\|transmitter codes]] used to identify returning teams. Should they fail to return or check in within twenty-four hours, the mission will be considered compromised.		* Soon afterward, the members of [[SG-1]] and [[SG-2]] assemble in the embarkation room fully equipped for departure. Before the mission begins, Samuels reminds O'Neill that rescuing Sha're and Skaara is not SG-1's primary objective. He also stresses the importance of adhering to security procedures involving the [[GDO\|transmitter codes]] used to identify returning teams. Should they fail to return or check in within twenty-four hours, the mission will be considered compromised.

	* As the [[Stargate]] connects to the destination reconstructed from Ferretti's observations, Hammond delivers his final instructions. O'Neill orders both teams and a fully equipped [[F.R.E.D.]] unit through the [[wormhole]]. Emerging on the far side, they find themselves on the world later identified as [[Chulak]]. Faced with a colder environment than expected, O'Neill orders the teams to secure their equipment and establish a temporary perimeter.		* As the [[Stargate]] connects to the destination reconstructed from Ferretti's observations, Hammond delivers his final instructions. O'Neill orders both teams and a fully equipped [[F.R.E.D.]] unit through the [[wormhole]]. Emerging on the far side, they find themselves on the world later identified as [[Chulak]]. Faced with a colder environment than expected, O'Neill orders the teams to secure their equipment and establish a temporary perimeter.

	* At the same time, back in the [[harem of Chulak]], [[Teal'c]] returns to select another candidate for implantation. His choice falls upon [[Sha're]], who is taken away by the guards despite her resistance.		* At the same time, back in the [[harem of Chulak]], [[Teal'c]] returns to select another candidate for implantation. His choice falls upon [[Sha're]], who is taken away by the guards despite her resistance.

	* While the teams begin surveying the area around the Stargate, O'Neill repeatedly questions [[Daniel Jackson\|Daniel]] about his ability to return them safely to Earth. Meanwhile, the others concentrate on securing the location. [[Warren]] discovers fresh tracks in the surrounding terrain, suggesting recent activity, while Carter Carter establishes a defensive perimeter using [[Claymore]] mines. Recognizing that the Stargate's location is vulnerable, Kawalsky recommends relocating and establishing a more secure base camp elsewhere.		* While the teams begin surveying the area around the Stargate, O'Neill repeatedly questions [[Daniel Jackson\|Daniel]] about his ability to return them safely to Earth. Meanwhile, the others concentrate on securing the location. [[Warren]] discovers fresh tracks in the surrounding terrain, suggesting recent activity, while Carter Carter establishes a defensive perimeter using [[Claymore]] mines. Recognizing that the Stargate's location is vulnerable, Kawalsky recommends relocating and establishing a more secure base camp elsewhere.
		⚫	* Deep within the [[Chulak palace implantation room]], [[Apophis]] examines Sha're and immediately appears impressed by her determination and spirit. Using his [[Goa'uld hand device]], he subdues her and orders that she be placed upon the altar. A female [[Yametha]] then approaches carrying a mature [[Goa'uld symbiote]] within her abdominal pouch. Unlike the previous candidate, Sha're is accepted by the creature. The symbiote fully emerges, enters her body through the back of her neck, and takes possession of her. Wracked with pain, Sha're screams as the implantation is completed before the eyes of Teal'c, becoming the new host chosen for Apophis' queen.

⚫	* Deep within the [[Chulak palace implantation room]], [[Apophis]] examines Sha're and immediately appears impressed by her determination and spirit. Using his [[Goa'uld hand device]], he subdues her and orders that she be placed upon the altar. A female [[Yametha]] then approaches carrying a mature [[Goa'uld symbiote]] within her abdominal pouch. Unlike the previous candidate, Sha're is accepted by the creature. The symbiote fully emerges, enters her body through the back of her neck, and takes possession of her. Wracked with pain, Sha're screams as the implantation is completed before the eyes of Teal'c, becoming the new host chosen for Apophis' queen.

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-* In the Stargate Command briefing room, a SCI top-secret meeting is occurring, led by General Hammond. According the Abydos kids, it was [[Ra]], yet Ra has been been killed by the bomb ({{ep|Stargate}}). Daniel Jackson states that the new threat are gods, at least, they pretend to be gods, and Ra isn't the last of his [[Goa'uld|race]]. According to Jackson, Ra's race was about to extinct, yet he took the body of an [[Ra's host|Egyptian boy]] and others like Ra may have done likewise. Colonel O'Neill is quite optimistic in defeating the enemy as they have done it already once. According to Captain Carter, all new data have been downloaded in the [[dialing computer]] and it will be able to determine two or three destinations a month. Even if Hammond is skeptical and afraid about what the Stargate could bring, he declares that the [[President of the United States]] gave green lit for the formation of nine top secret [[SG team|exploration teams]] operating to determine threats and if possible make peaceful contacts with the aliens. The first team, [[SG-1]], will be led by Colonel O'Neill and will have Captain Carter. Daniel Jackson claims to be part of the team as his wife has been kidnapped, yet Hammond has other plans for him. The second team, [[SG-2]] will be led by Major Kawalsky, a "moment of weakness" according to O'Neill who recommended Kawalsky for a command. An airman brings a note to Samuels, who announces that Ferretti has awaken. O'Neill rushes to him.
+* In the [[Stargate Command briefing room]], [[General]] [[George Hammond|Hammond]] convenes a classified meeting to assess the threat posed by the recent attack. Although eyewitnesses on [[Abydos]] believe that [[Ra]] has returned, both Hammond and [[Jack O'Neill]] point out that Ra was apparently killed ({{ep|Stargate}}). [[Daniel Jackson]] proposes another explanation, suggesting that Ra was not unique but merely one member of a larger [[Goa'uld|race]]. According to Daniel, the parasitic species once faced extinction and survived by taking human hosts, a fate that may have befallen many others besides Ra. While O'Neill remains confident that the enemy can be defeated as before, [[Samantha Carter|Captain Carter]] reveals that the information recovered on Abydos has allowed the [[dialing computer]] to begin calculating new Stargate destinations. Although the process remains slow, it will eventually provide access to previously unreachable worlds. Despite his concerns about the dangers awaiting beyond the Stargate, Hammond announces that the [[President of the United States]] has authorized the formation of nine secret [[SG team|teams]] tasked with exploration, reconnaissance, threat assessment, and diplomatic contact. [[SG-1]] will be led by O'Neill and include Carter, while [[SG-2]] will be commanded by [[Charles Kawalsky|Major Kawalsky]], much to O'Neill's amusement. When [[Daniel Jackson]] argues that he should accompany SG-1 because Sha're has been abducted, Hammond makes it clear that other plans have been made for him. The briefing is interrupted when [[Major]] Samuels receives word that [[Ferretti]] has regained consciousness, prompting O'Neill to head immediately for the infirmary.
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	* Meanwhile, in the [[Abydos Stargate room]], the ~~Abydonians~~ ~~and~~ ~~the~~ ~~rest~~ of the ~~team~~ ~~continue~~ to ~~rejoice, but suddenly,~~ the [[~~Stargate~~]] ~~dials~~ ~~in.~~ ~~Everybody take~~ cover. ~~When~~ ~~the wormhole is established~~, ~~some~~ [[Serpent guard]]s ~~come~~ ~~out, firing~~ immediately ~~using~~ their [[Goa'uld staff weapon\|staff weapons]]. The Abydonians and ~~the~~ ~~team~~ fire ~~back~~, ~~yet~~ the ~~Goa'uld~~ ~~have~~ the upper. [[Ferretti]] is ~~shot.~~ Sha're is ~~seized,~~ ~~subdued~~ ~~and~~ ~~checked~~ by [[Apophis]] ~~who~~ ~~thinks~~ ~~she~~ ~~may~~ be ~~the~~ ~~one~~. ~~Skaara is seized by~~ [[Teal'c]] ~~who~~ ~~asks~~ ~~him~~ ~~about~~ ~~the~~ ~~weapon~~ he ~~used.~~ ~~For~~ ~~all~~ ~~answer,~~ ~~Skaara split on Teal'c's~~ ~~face~~. ~~Then~~ ~~Apophis~~ ~~subdues~~ ~~Skaara~~ ~~and~~ ~~tells~~ ~~Teal'c~~ ~~that~~ ~~Skaara~~ is ~~good choice, a perfect specimen~~. ~~After~~ ~~that~~, ~~Apophis~~ ~~goes to~~ the [[Dial Home Device]] ~~and~~ ~~calls~~ an address. ~~Ferretti~~ ~~tries~~ to ~~lift~~ up ~~his~~ ~~head~~ ~~and~~ ~~check~~ the ~~symbols~~ ~~hit~~ ~~by Apophis, but collapses soon after~~. ~~Apophis~~ ~~and~~ ~~his~~ ~~faction~~ ~~leave~~ ~~taking~~ ~~Sha're~~ ~~and Skaara with them~~.		* Meanwhile, back in the [[Abydos Stargate room]], the celebrations are cut short when the [[Stargate]] suddenly activates. As the [[wormhole]] forms, everyone takes cover. Within moments, several [[Serpent guard]]s emerge and immediately open fire with their [[Goa'uld staff weapon\|staff weapons]]. The [[Abydonians]] and SG personnel return fire, but the attackers quickly gain the upper hand. During the assault, [[Ferretti]] is wounded, while [[Sha're]] and [[Skaara]] are captured. After briefly examining Sha're, [[Apophis]] appears to take a particular interest in her. [[Teal'c]] seizes Skaara and attempts to question him, but receives only defiance in return. Convinced that both prisoners are suitable candidates, Apophis orders them taken. Before departing, he uses the [[Dial Home Device]] to activate another Stargate address. Though badly injured, Ferretti manages to observe part of the sequence before collapsing. Moments later, the raiders depart with their captives.
	* O'Neill and the ~~small~~ ~~team~~ ~~are~~ ~~coming~~ ~~back in~~ the ~~Stargate~~ room to ~~find a devastated place,~~ with ~~many~~ wounded and dead ~~people~~. Daniel rushes to [[Bolaa]] who ~~has~~ ~~been~~ ~~badly~~ ~~wounded.~~ ~~Bolaa~~ ~~has~~ ~~just~~ the ~~time~~ ~~to say that~~ Ra ~~came~~ ~~to take~~ Sha're and Skaara. ~~Daniel~~ ~~replies~~ ~~that~~ Ra is ~~dead,~~ ~~and~~ ~~asks~~ ~~for the symbols~~, ~~but~~ Bolaa ~~dies~~ in his ~~hands~~. Carter ~~states~~ that Ferretti ~~need~~ medical attention. Daniel ~~tells~~ ~~them~~ ~~he can~~ send ~~them~~ on Earth ~~but~~ O'Neill ~~tells~~ ~~Daniel~~ that ~~he has to come with him this time.~~ Daniel ~~doesn't~~ ~~care~~, ~~but~~ ~~O'Neill~~ ~~convinces~~ ~~him~~ to ~~come~~ ~~back~~ in ~~order~~ ~~to find Sha're and Skaara.~~ ~~According~~ to ~~O'Neill,~~ ~~Ferretti~~ ~~may~~ ~~have seen the coordinates.~~ ~~Then~~, Daniel ~~asks~~ ~~the Abydonians~~ to ~~come~~ ~~around him~~ and ~~tells~~ them to seal the Stargate after ~~they~~ ~~leave~~. ~~Daniel~~ ~~will~~ ~~come~~ ~~back~~ in ~~one~~ year, with or without Sha're. ~~After~~ that, if he's not ~~coming~~ back, ~~they will have to seal~~ the ~~Stargate~~ ~~for~~ ~~ever.~~ ~~The Abydonians cry and hug Daniel before he~~ ~~leaves~~.		* Returning to the Stargate chamber, O'Neill and the others discover the aftermath of the attack. The room is littered with wounded and dead Abydonians. [[Daniel Jackson]] rushes to the side of [[Bolaa]], who lives just long enough to reveal that the assailant resembled [[Ra]] and that Sha're and Skaara have been taken. Before Daniel can learn anything more, Bolaa succumbs to his injuries. As [[Samantha Carter\|Carter]] points out that Ferretti requires immediate medical attention, Daniel offers to help send the wounded back to Earth. O'Neill, however, insists that Daniel accompany them, arguing that Ferretti may have seen enough of the dialing sequence to provide a lead. Before leaving, Daniel bids farewell to the Abydonians and instructs them to seal the Stargate after their departure. He promises to return within a year, with or without Sha're, and warns them that if he does not come back, the gate must remain sealed forever.
	* Daniel ~~stands before~~ the ~~Dial Home Device~~ and ~~calls~~ ~~Earth.~~ ~~Every~~ ~~people~~ ~~from~~ Earth ~~pass~~ ~~through~~ ~~the~~ ~~Stargate included the wounded ones. In~~ [[Stargate Command]], ~~Major~~ [[~~Samuels~~]] orders the [[Stargate Command control room\|control room]] to close a newly installed [[iris]] on ~~the~~ ~~Stargate.~~ ~~O'Neill~~ is ~~surprised~~ ~~and asks Hammond the reason~~ of ~~this~~. ~~Hammond~~ ~~explains~~ ~~that~~ ~~it's~~ ~~their insurance against any more surprises. The medics come~~ to ~~take~~ care of the wounded. O'Neill reports ~~then to Hammond that~~ the ~~base~~ ~~camp~~ ~~has~~ ~~been~~ ~~attacked~~ ~~when~~ ~~they~~ ~~were~~ ~~on recon mission and they kidnapped Jackson~~'~~s wife~~ and ~~one~~ of ~~their "kids".~~ Hammond ~~deduces~~ that ~~they are~~ the same ~~hostiles~~ ~~who~~ ~~came~~ on Earth. ~~Daniel~~ ~~greets~~ ~~General~~ ~~Hammond~~ ~~and~~ ~~asks~~ ~~him~~ to ~~be part of~~ the ~~team~~ ~~who~~ ~~will~~ ~~try~~ to ~~retrieve~~ ~~Skaara~~ ~~and Sha're~~. Hammond ~~glares~~ at ~~him~~ ~~and~~ ~~tells~~ ~~him he~~ is ~~not~~ in position to make ~~any demand~~.		* Daniel activates the Stargate and leads the survivors back to Earth. Upon their arrival at [[Stargate Command]], [[Major]] Samuels orders personnel in the [[Stargate Command control room\|control room]] to close the newly installed [[iris]], a security measure designed to prevent further unauthorized incursions. Medical teams quickly move in to care for the wounded while O'Neill reports the attack to [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]]. After hearing that Sha're and Skaara were abducted, Hammond concludes that the same hostile force responsible for the attack on Earth was behind the raid on Abydos. Determined to recover the captives, Daniel requests permission to join the mission. Hammond, however, makes it clear that Daniel is in no position to make demands.

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			* Moments after the confrontation, [[Daniel Jackson]] emerges and orders the armed [[Abydonians]] to lower their weapons. Reunited with his former companions, he greets [[Jack O'Neill]], who immediately turns his attention to [[Skaara]]. The two share an emotional reunion before O'Neill is introduced once again to the people of Abydos. Although surprised by the team's arrival, Daniel explains that the local militia was formed as a precaution against possible threats.
	* [[Daniel Jackson]] then runs out and asks the [[Abydonians]] to lower their guns. Jackson greats O'Neill. O'Neill moves forward, shoves Jackson without saying a word, and gets to [[Skaara]] who salutes him. O'Neill salutes him back and the two hug each other. Then O'Neill asks Jackson how he's doing. [[Ferretti]] salutes Jackson with the "live long and prosper" salute and [[Kawalsky]] gives to Jackson a pack of tissues. Then [[Sha're]] comes at Jackson's side. O'Neill shakes her hand. Jackson is not surprised to see that the military know that him and the Abydonians are still alive. O'Neill asks the reason of the militia. Jackson replies that it's just a precaution.
	* ~~Meanwhile,~~ ~~unwillingly~~ ~~interrupting~~ ~~them~~, Carter ~~is checking~~ the Abydos [[Dial Home Device]], the ~~missing~~ ~~part~~ from [[Earth~~]].~~ To ~~replace~~ it ~~they~~ ~~took~~ ~~fifteen~~ ~~years~~ ~~and~~ ~~three~~ ~~supercomputers~~ to ~~"[[MacGyver]]"~~ a ~~system.~~ ~~Then,~~ ~~O'Neill~~ ~~interrupts~~ ~~her and introduces Jackson to~~ ~~her~~.		* While the reunion continues, [[Samantha Carter\|Carter]] examines the Abydos [[Dial Home Device]], fascinated by the technology that had been missing from Earth's Stargate for years. Her interest quickly catches Daniel's attention, leading to a formal introduction between the two scientists.
	* ~~Jackson~~ ~~becomes~~ ~~suspicious~~ ~~and~~ ~~asks~~ ~~O'Neill~~ ~~what's~~ ~~going~~ on. O'Neill and Kawalsky explain the ~~situation.~~ ~~Jackson~~ ~~tells~~ ~~them~~ ~~that~~ ~~the~~ ~~aliens~~ ~~didn't~~ ~~come~~ ~~from~~ ~~here as~~ the ~~boys~~ ~~guard~~ ~~the~~ ~~gate~~ 36 ~~hours~~ a ~~day~~ ~~every~~ ~~day.~~ As ~~O'Neill~~ ~~wants~~ to ~~look~~ ~~around,~~ ~~Jackson~~ ~~wants~~ to help ~~them~~ to ~~find~~ ~~who~~ it ~~was~~ ~~but~~ ~~they'll~~ ~~have~~ to wait until ~~the~~ [[sandstorm]] is ~~over~~. He ~~proposes~~ ~~them~~ to ~~share~~ ~~their~~ evening meal.		* As the discussion turns to the recent attack on Earth, Daniel becomes concerned. O'Neill and [[Charles Kawalsky\|Kawalsky]] explain the events that took place at [[Stargate Command]], but Daniel insists that the intruders could not have originated from Abydos, as the gate is monitored around the clock by the local population. Eager to help uncover the truth, he offers his assistance, though any search must wait until a raging [[sandstorm]] has passed. In the meantime, he invites the team to join the Abydonians for an evening meal.
			* During the gathering, the reunion takes on a more celebratory atmosphere. [[Skaara]] introduces O'Neill to a potent local beverage, while Daniel reveals that [[Jack O'Neill's lighter\|O'Neill's lighter]] has remained one of Skaara's most treasured possessions since the previous mission. Eventually, the conversation returns to the mysterious visitor who resembled [[Ra]], prompting Daniel to suggest that he may have arrived through another [[Stargate]]. Before the matter can be discussed further, news arrives that the sandstorm has ended.
	* During the meal, Daniel proposes everybody to try a new meal, and Skaara asks O'Neill to try his own beverage, which O'Neill calls [[Skaara's moonshine]]. O'Neill drinks it, yet he splits it suddenly, rasping, "Smooth, very smooth". Everybody laugh. Then Skaara wants to give back [[O'Neill's lighter]] but O'Neill replies that he gave it to him to keep it. Daniel says to O'Neill that he always had it with him since he was gone. Then Daniel states that the guy who looked like [[Ra]] came frome another [[Stargate]]. Carter states that there is no other gate as they ran hundred of permutation for nothing. Daniel tells then that they didn't have what they needed. Then Skaara comes back and tells Daniel the sanstorm is over. He tells Sha're that he has to go, but Sha're grabs Daniel and gives him a long and passionate kiss. Daniel is stunned and the people are happy. Kawalsky stands up and asks Ferretti to "hold the fort".
			* Accompanied by several Abydonians, Daniel, O'Neill, Carter, and Kawalsky travel beyond the [[Abydos pyramid]] to a vast chamber discovered by Daniel during his explorations of the planet. The room is covered with hundreds of symbols arranged in carefully organized groups. After months of study, Daniel concluded that the markings do not form a written language but instead represent a map of a vast [[Stargate network]].
	* Daniel, O'Neill, Carter, Kawalsky, and three Abydonians leave the [[Abydos pyramid]]. Kawalsky expresses his "enthousiasm" to be here. They come into a [[Abydos cartouche chamber\|huge room containing hundred of symbols]]. Daniel explains that he explored all the perimeter starting with the [[Abydos town]], and then, one month later, he discovered this chamber. O'Neill asks Daniel if he had translated the writing yet. Daniel says that the symbols say nothing but they are arranged by group of seven, forming what it seems to be a chart, or more likely a map. According to Daniel, this map contains the addresses of a vast [[Stargate network\|network of Stargates]]. Carter says it cannot be as her team tried hundreds of permutation which didn't work. Daniel says he tried as well, but assumed that the destinations were destroyed or buried. He also asks where their Ra looklike came from. Daniel then says he's not specialist in astrophysics, but he thinks that the planets move. Carter then realizes that, according to the [[expanding universe model]], all celestial bodies are constantly moving. According to her, [[Abydos]] seems to be the closest planet from Earth, and the others cannot be reached using the [[dialing computer]] because the latter didn't take the planetary drift in its calculations. Now with this map as a base, she will be able adjust the computer model. O'Neill and Kawalsky ask for the conclusion. Carter says that the enemies could have come from anywhere as the Stargate can go to other places.
			* The discovery leads to a significant breakthrough. Carter realizes that the coordinates recorded on Abydos correspond to worlds whose positions have shifted over time due to the movement of celestial bodies. Because Earth's dialing computer failed to account for this stellar drift, most destinations within the network had become inaccessible. Using the Abydos map as a reference, she determines that the calculations can be corrected.
			* For O'Neill and Kawalsky, the implications are immediately clear: the attackers who infiltrated Earth could have originated from any world connected to the network. The scope of the threat facing humanity is suddenly far greater than anyone at [[Stargate Command]] had anticipated.

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	* ~~[[Major]]~~ [[~~Samuels]],~~ ~~General's~~ ~~[[Executive~~ ~~Officer~~]], arrives at [[Jack O'Neill's house]] by ~~car. He finds [[~~Jack O'Neill]], ~~now~~ ~~retired,~~ on ~~a roof, observing~~ ~~stars~~ ~~with~~ his [[Jack O'Neill's telescope\|telescope]]. ~~After~~ he ~~received~~ ~~advice~~ to ~~get~~ ~~reaffected~~ to [[~~N.A.S.A.~~]], ~~Samuels~~ ~~tells~~ ~~O'Neill~~ that ~~he's~~ ~~under~~ ~~order~~ to ~~bring~~ ~~him~~ to ~~General Hammond, who replaced General~~ [[~~W.O.~~ ~~West\|West~~]]. ~~Not~~ ~~interested~~ ~~first,~~ ~~O'Neill~~ ~~changes~~ ~~his~~ ~~mind~~ ~~when~~ ~~Samuels~~ ~~tells~~ ~~him~~ it ~~has~~ to do ~~with~~ ~~the~~ ~~Stargate~~.		* A [[United States Air Force\|U.S. Air Force]] sedan arrives outside the [[Jack O'Neill's house\|home of Jack O'Neill]]. While observing the night sky through his [[Jack O'Neill's telescope\|telescope]] from the rooftop, O'Neill is approached by [[Major]] [[Samuels]], who informs him that [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]] has requested his presence at [[Stargate Command]]. The mention of the [[Stargate]] is enough to capture the retired colonel's attention, and he agrees to accompany him.
			* Upon arriving at the [[Cheyenne Mountain Complex]], O'Neill is escorted deep underground to [[Level 28]], where he is introduced to Hammond in the [[SGC commander's office]]. Though officially retired, he quickly realizes that recent events are connected to his previous mission on [[Abydos]].
	* O'Neill is brought to the [[Cheyenne Mountain Complex]] by car, led by an [[Officer (Children of the Gods)\|officer]] then Samuels to [[Stargate Command commander office\|General Hammond's office]]. After a short introduction, O'Neill introduces the Stargate reason. Hammond leads him then to the [[Stargate Command infirmary\|infirmary]] where a [[MacKenzie\|Doctor]] is already here. The doctor pulls a sheet and reveals a dead [[Jaffa]]'s face and body. The doctor says they're not human as the have a [[symbiote pouch\|pouch]] similar to that found in a [[marsupial]], like a [[kangaroo]]. Hammond tells O'Neill that these aliens came here, killed four people and kidnapped another using advanced weapons. Surprised, O'Neill asks for the weapon, takes it, activates and deactivates it, and gives it back to an [[Johnson (Children of the Gods)\|airman]]. O'Neill says that there are no creature like this on [[Abydos]] as the [[People of Abydos]] originated from [[Earth]] and were brought by [[Ra]] thousands of years ago. Hammond, aware of that, asks O'Neill if Ra is really dead because Hammond had time to see the eyes of a man the aliens protected glowing, like Ra had.
			* To explain the situation, Hammond takes him to the [[Stargate Command infirmary]], where the bodies of two attackers killed during the recent incursion are being examined. Initial findings suggest that the intruders were not entirely [[human]]. O'Neill also recognizes a [[staff weapon]], similar to those he encountered on [[Abydos]], although the beings responsible appear unlike any he remembers.
	* As they come back to Hammond's office, O'Neill sees [[Major]]s [[Charles Kawalsky\|Kawalsky]] and [[Ferretti]] coming in the [[Stargate Command briefing room\|briefing room]]. As O'Neill asks for the reason of their presence here, Hammond asks him about [[Daniel Jackson]]. O'Neill says that, first, he didn't appreciate Daniel but he changed his mind as Daniel helped him and his team to get back to Earth.
			* During their discussion, Hammond revisits the events of the original [[Stargate mission]] and the true nature of [[Ra]]. When the general reveals that another individual displaying the same glowing eyes was seen escaping through the Stargate, O'Neill begins to suspect that the threat he believed destroyed may still exist.
	* Hammond reminds O'Neill about the mission brief: go trough the Stargate, detect any possible threat and if found, detonate a [[Mark III nuclear bomb\|nuclear device]] to destroy the Stargate on the other side. Then O'Neill has to admit they didn't do it right away as Ra's forces overpowered his team and took the bomb. But eventually, they regain control and did explode the bomb. He also states that Daniel Jackson and the people of Abydos are dead. At this moment, Hammond stands up and tells O'Neill he will authorize a go ahead on a plan. They go to the Stargate room.
			* As they make their way through [[Stargate Command]], Hammond questions O'Neill about the Abydos mission, paying particular attention to [[Daniel Jackson]]. Initially reluctant to elaborate, O'Neill eventually acknowledges the crucial role Jackson played in the success of the expedition and the survival of his team.
	* In the corridor, Hammond is startled about the toughness of the [[naquadah\|Stargate's quartz material]]. As they come into the Stargate room, O'Neill is aghast to see another [[Mark V nuclear bomb\|bomb]] ready to be launched. As the [[countdown]] has already started, Hammond is awaiting O'Neill reaction. Then O'Neill tells that his mission report wasn't entirely accurate as Ra has been killed in orbit, not on the planet, and Daniel Jackson is still alive, living with the people of Abydos. Upset, Hammond tells a [[technician (Children of the Gods)\|technician]] to send the bomb on schedule. Because O'Neill disobeyed direct orders, Hammond orders to bring O'Neill in the [[Stargate Command holding room\|holding room]].
			* Hammond then reminds him of the original mission objectives: to determine whether Earth faced a threat from the other side of the Stargate and, if necessary, destroy the gate on [[Abydos]] with a nuclear weapon. However, several inconsistencies in the official report lead Hammond to question whether he has been told the whole story.
			* In the [[Stargate embarkation room]], O'Neill discovers that a [[Mark V bomb]] is being prepared for deployment to [[Abydos]]. Faced with Hammond's suspicions, he finally admits that his mission report omitted a crucial detail: [[Daniel Jackson]] and the [[Abydonians]] survived. Furious at being deceived, Hammond orders O'Neill's arrest while allowing preparations for the mission to continue.

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	* More than ~~one~~ year after [[Ra]]'s ~~death~~, the [[Stargate]] is ~~active~~ ~~again~~ ~~and~~ it ~~seems~~ ~~that~~ ~~[[Apophis\|Ra]]~~ ~~is still~~ ~~alive~~.		* More than a year after [[Ra]]'s defeat, the [[Stargate]] unexpectedly activates, revealing that powerful enemies still exist beyond Earth.
	* ~~Following~~ ~~theses events~~, [[Jack O'Neill]] returns ~~back~~ to [[Abydos]]~~, having orders~~ to ~~bring back~~ [[Daniel Jackson]].		* In response, [[Jack O'Neill]] returns to [[Abydos]] to retrieve [[Daniel Jackson]] and investigate the growing threat.
	* ~~Once arrived~~, a [[Stargate network~~\|discovery~~]] ~~will~~ ~~change~~ ~~the~~ ~~fate~~ of ~~[[Stargate~~ ~~Command]]~~.		* There, a discovery concerning the [[Stargate network]] fundamentally changes humanity's understanding of the galaxy.
	* A [[Stargate Program~~\|new secret program~~]] ~~rises~~ with nine [[SG team\|teams]] ~~of cross-planetary explorers~~.		* To defend Earth and explore the worlds connected by the Stargate, the [[Stargate Program]] is expanded with the creation of nine dedicated [[SG team\|SG teams]].
	* During a ~~recon and~~ rescue mission ~~on an unknown~~ [[Chulak~~\|planet~~]], ~~The~~ newly ~~created~~ [[SG-1]] ~~team will obtain help from~~ an [[Teal'c\|unlikely ~~allie~~]].		* During a rescue mission to [[Chulak]], the newly formed [[SG-1]] gains an [[Teal'c\|unlikely ally]].

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	* In the [[Stargate Command embarkation room]], five [[United States Air Force\|U.S. Air Force]] airmen pass the time with a game of [[poker]]. The [[Stargate]], inactive for several weeks, is covered by a protective [[tarp]]. As their conversation turns to the prolonged absence of senior officers, [[~~Corporal~~]] [[Weterings]] notices a slight movement beneath the covering. Her companions dismiss it as a trick of the eye, but after spotting a second movement, she decides to investigate.		* In the [[Stargate Command embarkation room]], five [[United States Air Force\|U.S. Air Force]] airmen pass the time with a game of [[poker]]. The [[Stargate]], inactive for several weeks, is covered by a protective [[tarp]]. As their conversation turns to the prolonged absence of senior officers, [[Senior Airman]] [[Weterings]] notices a slight movement beneath the covering. Her companions dismiss it as a trick of the eye, but after spotting a second movement, she decides to investigate.
	* As she makes her way up the ramp, the ground begins to tremble. The tarp is suddenly thrown aside as the ring starts to rotate. Moments later, a [[kawoosh\|vortex]] erupts from the gate. Curious, Weterings approaches the [[event horizon]], but a small [[Goa'uld scanning grenade\|Goa'uld probe]] the size of an orange emerges and lands at her feet before scanning her. As she bends down to inspect it, several [[Serpent guard]]s step through the horizon. Leading them are [[Apophis]] and [[Teal'c]]. After immobilizing Weterings with a [[Goa'uld hand device\|paralyzing device]], the intruders engage the personnel in the embarkation room. Two Serpent guards are killed, but all four [[Tau'ri]] soldiers are cut down in the exchange. Before being fatally struck by a [[staff weapon]], [[Fryatt]] manages to activate the base alarm.		* As she makes her way up the ramp, the ground begins to tremble. The tarp is suddenly thrown aside as the ring starts to rotate. Moments later, a [[kawoosh\|vortex]] erupts from the gate. Curious, Weterings approaches the [[event horizon]], but a small [[Goa'uld scanning grenade\|Goa'uld probe]] the size of an orange emerges and lands at her feet before scanning her. As she bends down to inspect it, several [[Serpent guard]]s step through the horizon. Leading them are [[Apophis]] and [[Teal'c]]. After immobilizing Weterings with a [[Goa'uld hand device\|paralyzing device]], the intruders engage the personnel in the embarkation room. Two Serpent guards are killed, but all four [[Tau'ri]] soldiers are cut down in the exchange. Before being fatally struck by a [[staff weapon]], [[Fryatt]] manages to activate the base alarm.
	* As security teams rush toward the embarkation room, Apophis orders the Stargate to be reactivated. Just as the Goa'uld prepare to depart, [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]] bursts into the room and orders his men to hold their fire when he sees Weterings being held captive. He watches as Apophis' eyes flash with the telltale glow of a Goa'uld before the System Lord closes his helmet. Apophis then steps through the [[event horizon]], followed by Teal'c, who takes the young woman with him. Once the gate shuts down, Hammond slowly ascends the ramp and stares at the silent installation, visibly stunned by what he has just witnessed.		* As security teams rush toward the embarkation room, Apophis orders the Stargate to be reactivated. Just as the Goa'uld prepare to depart, [[General]] [[George Hammond\|Hammond]] bursts into the room and orders his men to hold their fire when he sees Weterings being held captive. He watches as Apophis' eyes flash with the telltale glow of a Goa'uld before the System Lord closes his helmet. Apophis then steps through the [[event horizon]], followed by Teal'c, who takes the young woman with him. Once the gate shuts down, Hammond slowly ascends the ramp and stares at the silent installation, visibly stunned by what he has just witnessed.